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this is a poem about the main character in hitokiri mech:surith

what was that thought?
i thought i thought?
though my thoughts are gone.
i still remember the thought.
but i cant reach it.
what happened to my family?
what do you look like mom?
what do you look like dad?
little,big,brother,sister i might have had?
why am i cursed with this.
this thing on my arm?
my past life is shrouded in mist.
i cant remember anything
but i know what i have gained.

sucks,yeah i know but i got really bored in here(im in my mom's classroom)

Well, the rhyming scheme is alright; some punctuation is needed, however the poem is alright.

Classroom? Is she teacher or student?

(Sat Nov 19 2005, 02:13 AM)Toriban Wrote: [ -> ]Classroom? Is she teacher or student?

teacher