Rain
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Excellent, the rhyming was perfect for most of poem.

I agree with the tone and the message that you have set in the poem. Smile
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Rain - by Nux - Sun Nov 20 2005, 10:18 PM
RE: Rain - by SimsHsia - Mon Nov 21 2005, 05:28 PM
RE: Rain - by kuponut - Tue Nov 22 2005, 04:52 PM

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