Rain

[Nux]

The rain is pouring
and the skies are gray.
It's another evening
of a gloomy day.

It was bright and sunny
the day before,
When I walked outside
and couldn't want more.

Now I try to take a walk
and the rain drenches me.
What happened to the sky,
why is it so cloudy?

I wish that it was sunny,
that the sky would go back to blue,
but that wish is pretty funny,
'cause it'll take a while to come true.

So in the meantime, why not look,
for the good side of this.
There definately must be something
that I've skipped over and missed.

Rainy days are gray,
but why must gray be bad?
Maybe gray represents peace,
the calm that we all once had.

Maybe rain is a reminder,
for all of us today.
Snap back to reality,
before you end up in dismay.

Life isn't always sunny,
with a perfectly blue sky.
There are occasional rainstorms,
that often make me cry.

But after the storm passes,
I stand up and see,
that the unpleasant rainstorm,
only came to help me.

Because I learn a lesson,
one that we can learn from mice,
That when I find out the error,
I won't make the same mistake twice.

So there is a lesson,
that I can learn from rain:
Avoid making the same mistake twice,
so that next time you avoid the pain.

[SimsHsia]

Excellent, the rhyming was perfect for most of poem.

I agree with the tone and the message that you have set in the poem.

[kuponut]

i remember this!i remember this!!! and yup its very good.
to answer your question in math form

Black=bad

black-(60%)=gray
40%black=evil

therefore gray is bad.