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Fri Nov 18 2005, 05:30 PM

Well, the rhyming scheme is alright; some punctuation is needed, however the poem is alright.

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lost memories - by kuponut - Fri Nov 18 2005, 05:05 PM

RE: lost memories - by SimsHsia - Fri Nov 18 2005, 05:30 PM

RE: lost memories - by Toriban - Sat Nov 19 2005, 02:13 AM

RE: lost memories - by kuponut - Tue Nov 22 2005, 09:59 PM

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